Think the two photos on the article are too similar, maybe the cover headshot and a full body photo in a different surrounding could work. The quote from the article doesn't really sound right either, something like "The idea that people are coming solely to see me will be an situation I've never experienced before". The pictures on the contents look a tad odd because of the colour + b&w one together, if you decide to do another photo for the article like I suggested then maybe that one could replace the b&w photo from the contents. You've used the headshot from the cover on every page so would just give it a bit more variety. Think it should be in colour too so the contents looks a bit cleaner and has a more established colour scheme.
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ReplyDeleteThink the two photos on the article are too similar, maybe the cover headshot and a full body photo in a different surrounding could work. The quote from the article doesn't really sound right either, something like "The idea that people are coming solely to see me will be an situation I've never experienced before". The pictures on the contents look a tad odd because of the colour + b&w one together, if you decide to do another photo for the article like I suggested then maybe that one could replace the b&w photo from the contents. You've used the headshot from the cover on every page so would just give it a bit more variety. Think it should be in colour too so the contents looks a bit cleaner and has a more established colour scheme.
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